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Lead: Does the lead involve you in the story and illustrate the theme? How?

The lead involves me in the story, because of course in our time period, it is seen as almsot a sin to not have a cell phone. So I think it will draw people in because they will be curious to read about a person that doesn't have a phone.

Does it do more than just tellyou what the story is about?

It includes a good quote from the student who doesn't have material objects.

 Are there other types of leads that would be more effective?

I think a scene would be a good choice too, but your lead is very effective just as it is.

Information: What questions would you like answered in the next 300-400 words?

I would like to find out whether there has ever been a time where the student has felt ashamed or peer pressured. I would also like to know maybe some students views on why they think Central is viewed as a rich school.

What do you still want to know more about?

I still want to know the point of view of a student who does have materical objects. I also think it could be cool to include a parent's view, whether its the parent of an unspoiled student or a parent who indulges their kid.
And of course, include any other suggestions you have for improvement.

I think it is really good so far, I would just add some more point of views and sources. I think it is a realy good and unique theme and topic! Good job!

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